Friday, May 21, 2010

Research Questions And Facts for The Death Cycle

Hillman,Harold.People Who Murder Animals:Harold  Hillman.

Marian's biography

"Hi my name is Marian White, but people call me Mary. In this novel will realize alot about my family and the peole around me. Ever since I was born my mother was afraid of losing me so quickly because that is what happens in all of my family's generations. For example according to my great grandmother whenever a mother has a female child they die at a young age. They do not die alone there is eigther an pet, or an item they tipically are buried together. It's not all of the females that die. Especially in this story.

Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Harvard Outline for The Death Cycle

I. Introduction
a.2003 and takes place in a 6'2 feet long mansion
b.Marian,Susan,Nicholas,Mrs.White, Mr.White,Precious and grandma White.
c.in this story it will include lots of ,sad times and most of all DEATH.

II.Rising Action
a.Maria-she can be a loving caring "mother" to her puppie named Precious that she has August 12 2009. She can also be over protective when it comes to Precious. For example if some people dare hurt, harm or phisically abuse Precious she has 3 easy steps to take care of it. Step1. tell the person(s) what exactly she will do to them. Step2. she will beat them up until she has gotten all of the anger out of her system.Step3.she will take Precious and simply walk away.
b.Marian cares about Precious because she is the first pet that Marian ever had.Also Precious taught Marian how to be responsible,love something and most of all how to value something.
c.Precious motivates Marian because she brings joy to Marian's little heart so Marian wants to wake up  and see that little waggling tail.

III.Climax
a.Everything starts being sad when Precious dies in the story.
b.in my story death is the resolution.

IV.The Falling Action
a.Death is the direct results of the climax
b.the main charaters reactions are grieving and dieing

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

THE DEATH CYCLE

  "Mary my dear please pick up after your dog has her morning bathroom break" Ms.White asked.

   "Yes mam" Mary replied. Now there were only 3 people that Mary truly loved they were god {because she was a christian}, her father {because she was a daddy's girl},and most of  her puppie precious who was only 11 months.

     Oh yes by the way my name Marian White, but people call me Mary.
"Precious, Precious where are you"? Mary asked. Not too soon Mary saw Precious' little head pop up out of my sister Susan's room.

     "All right kids I am about to leave for my business trip wish me lost of luck and love so that I can be able to get my promotion"Mr.White said. "Awwww dad why do you have to leave so soon"? Marian asked. " Yes dad why do you have to leave for a year"? Nicholas {Mary's older brother )asked. "He only has to leave because he wants a good job this is a once in a life time chance that he can get. A chance that you will never get" Susan said. "Hey why do you have to be so mean I am your brother you know" Nicholas replied. "I don't care you can be my twin sister,and I will still tell you the same thing.Oh and daddy doesn't love you he only loves me, Marian, and mom"Susan said.     

"How do you know that"? Nicholas asked. "Well it's because your ugly" "WHAT"?Nicholas asked in complete shock. "I said that dad does'nt love you because your ugly"Susan said. Ok kids I will see you in one year" said Mr.White."Alright daddy, but when are you coming back"Marian asked."When it is your 12th birthday"Susan cut in."How on earth did you know that Susan"?Mr.White asked."I have people"Susan replied."Blaah blaah blaah know it all"Nicholas said."What did you just say big mouth"?Susan Asked. "You heared me fish breath"Nicholas said."Whaaaaat!oh yea, oh yea, oh yea listen this is America this is a free country I have my rights I don't have to listen to you that's why I'm going to kick your but"  Susan said before she attacked him violently". "Bye sweet heart" Mrs.White said. "See you soon dear"Mr.White replied.

                            ONE BLOOODY MONTH AFTER MR.WHITE LEFT

    "Marian be careful when you are walking across the street with Precious"Ms.White said. "OK mom"Marian replied."HI THERE Marian's 6th grade teacher Mr. Enders shouted where are you headed to"?he asked."Ahh!" Marian  screamed.Then she ran across the street when a 16 wheeled truck turned the corner and with one blink of the eye the huge truck hit Precious and she was gone.Boom! suddently Marian fainted on the floor. "Mary come home for....Ahh! Mary are you alright? Mrs.white yelled.

      "I'm sorry little girl". The truck driver said. "What happened to her"?.Mrs.White asked. "Well mam all I did was say hello to Mary. She must have been frightened by me so she ran into the street, the huge truck turne around the corner,and the poor puppie got hit and died replied Mr. Enders. "We have to get her to the hospital NOW!.Mrs.White yelled.

                                             A Few Hours Later

      "Mam your daughter is very sick, and it seems to me that she is in a puppie shock" the doctor said."What is a puppie shock"? Mrs.White asked. "Well a puppie shock is when a person has eigther lost their puppie, someone has stole it orit has died" the doctor replied. "Her puppie just died in a car crashso what is the cure? Mrs.White asked. "When a puppie has died there is no cure in saving the person the doctor said. Beep...Beep...Beeeep. "I am sorry Mrs.White Marian has died". the doctor sadly said. "No! Mrs.White said  she took out her cell phone and called her house. Susan come to the hospital on west 128st hurry"... the call dropped. What did you say after 128st mom? mom" Susan asked. Instantly Susan new that something was wrong because it was the sound of her mothers voice it was so worried.With-in 30 minutes Susan was at the hospital , but sadly she found out that not only her little sister and Precious died her mother died to. she had an heart attack
                                                     One Year Later

       "Hey kids where is my birthday girl"? Mr.White asked. "Umm dad Marian, Precious and mom died when you went on your business trip "Susan said sadly.Mr.Whites' heart dropped. "Dad I know it's hard, but... dad? Susan asked. I'm having a st...st...strokeMr. White whispered before he died. "Oh my gosh it's like a death cycle in this family. Now it's only the both of us" Nicholas said. "Lets go by grandma she will take care of us" Susan suggested."Susan" Nicholas said. "What gorilla face"?. "Forget it" Nicholas replied.

       "Hi my sweeties" grandmother said. "Hi grandma" both Susan and Nicholas said. "I was just cutting..."grand mother said. "Ahh Susan" Nicholas screamed. When her grandmother turned around she had the knife hat she was cutting chicken within her hand, and it flew out and stuck Susan right in the heart. It sliced Nichola's arm also, but he didn't notice until all of the blood in his body drained out of him.
                            HERE CONCLCUDES THE DEATH CYCLE

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Lesson 1

1. Some people might care less about the Orangutans because like people say "money makes the world go around".

2. The word Orangutan means "man in the forest" this is an apt for these type of animals because it shows their

3. The main reason(s) that Orangutans are threatened by extinction is that they lost their habiat, they are often killed and/or eaten.

4. One way that Galdika's is motivated by her curiosity  about Orangutans is that she sends most Orangutans to rehab centers.

5. Orangutans need foster parents because thet are just like humans they need someone to take care of them.The benrfits that humans provide is to love and make sure that people and animals feel like they are wanted in this world.

Thursday, January 28, 2010

Tyesha's Quiz on antecedents

Try to find the antecedent's in each sentence

1. The police man asked the boy what he was doing.
  
    A.the police man

    B. the boy

    C.was doing

2. The teacher asked the children where they were going.

   A. they were

   B. the teacher

   C.the children

Friday, January 15, 2010

Byron is mature now ?

Byron used to be an over all jerk but, as soon as his parents took him to Georgia.